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Academic Discussion: one well-developed example in 10 minutes

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Depth beats breadth

10 minutes is enough to develop one example properly — not enough to develop three. Here's how to spend it, worked through with a real prompt.

The mistake to avoid

Listing several thin reasons instead of developing one properly. Reads as a list, not an argument.

"Competition is important because it motivates people. It also helps people improve. Teamwork is also good sometimes."

Three unexplained claims — nothing concrete for the reader to picture.

What "developed" means

One reason + one specific detail + the "so what" — why that detail actually supports your position.

"Cooperation matters because teams work well together." — too generic

"The biggest achievements — a product launch, a research breakthrough — come from a team combining different skills."

The 10-minute budget

~2 min pick your one example, ~7 min develop it fully, ~1 min check you've engaged a classmate.

Pick early — still deciding at minute 3 means no time left to develop it.

Full example

Real prompt: Professor Reyes — competition vs. cooperation. Tariq says competition; Elena says cooperation.

One position, one developed example, one engagement

"I believe cooperation matters more for success. The biggest achievements come from a team combining different skills, not one person outcompeting everyone else. As Tariq points out, competition pushes people to work harder — but that effort only becomes real achievement when channeled into a shared goal."

The mistake to avoid → what "developed" means → time budget → full example, revealed in order
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4 things to know about developing 1 example

  1. What's the mistake to avoid?Listing several shallow points instead of developing one.
  2. What does "well-developed" mean?One reason + one specific detail + why it supports your position.
  3. How do I budget 10 minutes?~2 min pick, ~7 min write, ~1 min check for engagement.
  4. What does a full response look like?One position, one developed example, one classmate engaged.

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