One developed idea, not five thin ones
A clear position, held consistently, backed by reasons that are explained and given a real example — that's what separates a Task 2 opinion essay from a list of claims.
The real question
"The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?"
A developed paragraph (agree)
A shorter working week would let employees recover from work-related stress, which improves long-term productivity rather than reducing it. Exhausted employees make more mistakes and take more sick days, so extra rest is an investment, not a loss. Trial programs in Iceland and at companies including Microsoft Japan found that output held steady, or even improved, once hours were cut.

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4 things to know about opinion essays
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